October 11, 2019

Chapter 4 Branch One Flow

So here's the next bit of narrative flow, or at least the rough structure of one. There's a little bit of three-bracing in here, which is something I want to ultimately limit. It's not that I don't like Yes/No/Neutral dilemmas, but the coin flip Yes/No is more appropriate to the theme. Ok, rambling now.

Here, have the new flow: